first, from Andrew Ferguson:
Field calls it the "pinch". Vogler calls it the "second major threshold". What they both refer to is the middle of the traditional second act of the three-act structure. For God's sake, gentlemen, LET'S CALL A SPADE A SPADE! It's been there all along, yet no story structuralist wants to go against the grain and say that the middle act is in fact TWO ACTS (point C on the diagram). What's the problem with acknowledging that the traditional three-act structure has in fact been a four-act structure all along? It's not going to shake the foundations of Hollywood. But it might help screenwriters fix stories that sag between pages 30 and 90 (in the 120-page paradigm). p.1/120 REALM 1 . . . . A . . . . REALM 4 . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * ACT 1 | ACT 4 * . p.30 B-------------------|-------------------D p.90 . * ACT 2 | ACT 3 * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . . * | * . REALM 2 . . . . C . . . . REALM 3 p.60 LEGEND: REALM 1 The hero's Ordinary World. This is the realm That the hero knows -- he knows the terrain and how to live in it. But here is just your average Joe Public, although he displays hero potential. REALM 2 The Netherworld. This is the realm the novice hero must pass through to reach the Kingdom of Evil. This territory is unknown, frightening and wonderful. Here, the hero is swept along on an inexorable tide that leads to ... REALM 3 The Kingdom of Evil. Here the forces of evil are the masters. This is their home turf, where they are strongest. The hero is gonna have to be very clever to avoid capture. REALM 4 Back to the Netherworld. Only now the hero knows the rules and expectations of this realm. He'll need this knowledge to help him evade the pursuit by the Bad Guys. NOTES ON THE ACTS. - Each act is the reflection of it's opposite. Realm 1 is the opposite of Realm 3, just as Realm 2 is the flipside of Realm 4. Where in Act One the hero feels relatively safe, secure, and in control, in Act Three he faces mortal danger, uncertainty, discomfort, etc. - In Act Four, the flight, the helpers of Act Two reverse to become hinderers (revealed to be agents of evil all along), the hinderers of Act Two reverse to become helpers (swapping sides to join the forces of good). - The development of the hero shows a similar opposition between Act 1 & 3 and Act 2 & 4. In Act One the hero is a powerless orphan; in Act Three he has become a powerful warrior. In Act Two he is a wanderer in the Netherworld, acting on his own behalf and being pulled or lead toward the domain of evil; by Act Four the hero has become a Martyr working for society, leading the way instead of following. There is *nothing wrong* with working in four acts instead of three. You still work with a beginning, middle, and end. You still work with ascending levels of conflict and crises. It will only make your story stronger by clarifying the middle of your story. My two cents. Got change for a dime? ;-) Cheers, Andrew Ferguson.
If it works for you, your writing and screenplays, go for it. I've often felt reading other scripts the middle of Act Two was a critical point in the story; getting from page 30 to page 90 is agony without page 60, to my way of thinking, so I try another mini-story in 30-60 and another mini-story in 60-90 --call them B-story and C-story perhaps. I enjoyed the graph, and explication on Realms and Acts. Well done.
Andrew, Welcome to the club! You're not alone on this one. In fact, when I was teaching the screenwriters class in Texas, I told the students there that I was a firm believer in mythic four act structure as I call it. They kind of looked at me like WHAT? Now there's four of them? Vogler even divides them into four acts himself. I don't think he goes into it in JOURNEY but in his class he flat out told us he looks at them in four acts. I was happy to see someone else thought the way I did. He told us exactly what I told my students that day. Us writers will just have to keep that little ditty to ourselves. I can hardly get producers and development people to understand three act structure. Throwing another one in would just devestate them. :-)
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