c97fd5 No.4624631
Hey /pol/,
A couple months ago I created a site to host my own webcomic which I intended to be a red pill oriented humor comic.
I wanted to get your critique on the material I have out so far. Here is a few of my latest.
The site is http://redpanels.com
0f77ba No.4624699
108f3e No.4624839
c97fd5 No.4624857
Funnily enough, I've noticed that my comic posted to voat.co fairs alot better in the votes than it does on most of reddit.
>>4624699
Thanks!
111394 No.4624901
>>4624678
The Bernie one there would have been even better if he was placing his hand over his heart, but I till chuckled.
0bb891 No.4624924
4b4fd0 No.4624930
Good work. Simple but straightforward.
08bf79 No.4624977
Tweet the pepe one to Trump
c97fd5 No.4625034
>>4625012
Ok I believe that all of them.
c97fd5 No.4625095
>>4625021
>>4624977
>>4624930
>>4624924
>>4624901
>>4624839
>>4624699
Thanks for the input guys.
Im particularly interested if there was comic that you didn't like.
Moreover, is it fair to say that the theme of the comic is aligned with what you consider to be redpill thpught?
216007 No.4625109
>>4624631
These are all clever OP. I really dig the third strip.
Keep it up.
9783af No.4625115
>>4624992
>college campus rape
>existing
must be the punchline
c97fd5 No.4625193
>>4625115
Yeah, I was a bit conflicted with that inclusion. I was trying to juxapose the attention of college campus rape vs prison rape.
7514c8 No.4625207
>>4625095
Redpilled thought implies some kind of deep understanding.
These abide by basic human logic and are pretty clever and that makes them better than 98% of other webcomics.
Keep em coming OP.
994190 No.4625215
>>4624971
>arbitrarily taxing tea
This is what americans actually believe.
Pretty good comics though.
f5c65a No.4625223
>>4624631
Pretty good, but you need to improve your drawing skills. Good writing doesn't excuse mediocre art.
http://8ch.net/loomis/hub.html
https://mega.nz/#F!es1BSKQR!spODyd0iaQmMelGA2GscFw
6a9733 No.4625283
>>4624678
>>4624631
I really wanted to be a dick and burst your bubble. But I like it solid 8/10, upgraded to 10/10 if you keep making them
216007 No.4625285
>>4625223
Not the OP, but I don't think art matters too much for comics like these. Many comic creators focus on making the strips readable and simplistic to draw so that they can create it before deadlines. It's why xkcd has stick figures.
6a9733 No.4625291
>>4625223
I thought the same thing.. But the more I look at it the more i like it. I like how its quasi dr suess like.
2c95c7 No.4625332
42feb7 No.4625350
>>4625223
It would be pretty cool and inspirational if he improved his draftsmanship though. I'm all for creating a right-wing clique of artists.
41289f No.4625403
>>4625215
It was an impasse. You guys fucked up when you forced us to trade with the French to survive. Got funny French ideas from them.
5a1150 No.4625411
>was about to start ripping into the shitty art
>realize that at least is not dumblr art and its actually funny
well shit, you earned a bump
2c95c7 No.4625429
some really funny shit mayn
bumpsity
6a9733 No.4625449
>>4625095
Only one that wasnt good was the child violence one. The rest are astounding, you shouls be proud. Being able to simplify redpills and make them witty is an art and youve mastered it.
I didnt like the child one because there are rare instances where a kid needs to, learn an important lesson where words will fail, get backhanded. That being said.. Comics like that one might be good for attracting plebs. Maybe even do one about the Superbowl.
c6668a No.4625466
Good shit. I'm printing these fuckers out and pasting them over leftist garbage wherever I see it.
000000 No.4625545
This is real good, keep it up!
4d186b No.4625547
>>4624678
>>4624951
>>4624971
>>4624992
>>4625012
>>4625034
>>4624631
Noice m8.
Not too edgy, the kind of thing that I can post on kikebook.
5b40ca No.4625551
Pretty gud OP, don't rush it but please keep making more.
0bb891 No.4625606
>>4625095
Honestly I liked them all. You have a talent for this. Keep it up bro
3d0f8c No.4625618
I like it OP, I can't tell what the success will be with normies, but I would say bretty good/10
c97fd5 No.4625624
>>4625034
I think I forogt to post one.
c5a46d No.4625639
>>4624678
These four are pretty good. Keep it up.
c97fd5 No.4625657
I am appreciating all the feedback, guys.
I also don't impose any sort of faggy copyright posting rules on the comics either. Feel free to share them where ever.
9ebc79 No.4625672
>>4625095
My least favorite was the Fem Diagram >>4624992
(but I love the name Fem Diagram; I'm usually tickled by new puns I've never heard before)
1. Evidence for campus rapes is shaky at best, as >>4625115 implied.
2. Sharia law isn't something feminists usually protest, as they tend to believe Muslims are minorities that deserve special treatment)
3. The inclusion of HL3, while an ebin maymay, devalues the other "Problems That Actually Exist."
4. It was a bit of a risky comic to include so many issues in one, I suppose, as feminists are still individuals that don't all fight for the exact same things. Whereas your other comics that focus on one or two issues obviously target people that follow that way of thinking, not a group of "feminists." If you show this comic to an actual feminist, she'd probably jump and say "B-but I DO want to help Greece, and I don't care that much about manspreading." making the comic less effective.
Otherwise, your comics are awesome. I've already shared your wage gap comic on Zuckerbook today before I even saw this thread, because I saved it when you posted it months ago. Keep up the good work!
c5a46d No.4625704
>>4625657
Thanks, a few of these are good enough I can send them to friends. You have good pacing which is half the battle. You could easily pirate photoshit and increase the production value but honestly these are good and simple as-is so I don't really think anything is necessary.
1424c7 No.4625759
Kek, these are great. Keep it up, OP
c97fd5 No.4625848
>>4625672
I pretty much agree with every point you made about Fem Diagram, yeah.
Thanks for sharing it on facebook. My website analytics said I had some small traffic from there a while back, and since I never post there I was wondering what comic made the jump.
6a9733 No.4625915
>>4625657
>feel free
Wasnt asking permission but uh I guess thats good too :^)
de0778 No.4625995
dbc830 No.4626069
OP you're doing a great job. I thoroughly disagree with what >>4625207 said about redpilled thought requiring deep understanding. These are simple, easy to absorb, and have good comedic pacing, which is everything a redpill should have.
The Fem Diagram wasn't perfect, but even great chefs sometimes mess up a dish, so don't lose sleep over it.
959c6e No.4626088
I like them. Good stuff OP. The way they are drawn makes it very accessible in my opinion which is good. Very easy to spread to anyone. The topics and humour mixed in are also on point. It is intelligent while not being overwhelming for the less intelligent people out there. Some make the mistake of being too verbose, but I didn't notice that with your comic as I was able to easily finish all of them without taking a break. This is good because the average person's attention span is pretty short. Keep up the good work.
dd2303 No.4626096
>>4625624
Netherlands kinda looks like his shirt is penetrated his jaw and replaced his tounge.
What I'm saying is, don't use the same color for both there.
Also that light-saber is too phallic.
WE NEED LIGHTPUSSIES!
a4f2e0 No.4626141
93688a No.4626158
>>4625215
You brits also had a bad mercantilism problem with the East India Trading co. You asked for the ass kicking to be honest. Keep up the euRAPE progress
93688a No.4626161
>>4626158
Oh and shit got real when you came for the guns.
de8a92 No.4626190
>>4624631
>OP was not a faggot
>Anon read through all of the strips
8ad77b No.4626240
>>4624631
Pretty gr8 tbh m8
Well thought out and neatly presented.
1aa83a No.4627191
You guys are great, thanks for the input. I'll keep on trucking with these comics.
352946 No.4627235
These are great OP. I saved a whole bunch. These are basically very effective red pills in and of themselves. So many hypocrisies well presented and completely unarguable.
Disagree with the child punishment one. That is all. Keep up the good work OP.
53c94d No.4627270
original ones are good, stuff that relies too much on the memes is hit and miss
"herd needs more diversity" was 5/5
8b1201 No.4627406
>>4624631
Bretty good, OP. :DD
I luv you. :DD
6a4199 No.4627919
>today, OP wasn't a fag
>pretty based actually.
These are awesome.
I guess I agree that the violent child one
is kind of a basic lefty joke as it is.
I would add an extra panel of child protection services pummeling the father.
b23dc1 No.4628054
Fucking awesome stuff. Bookmarked.
53c94d No.4628170
>>4627919
>not using that comic to lure lefties in
e008f0 No.4628574
>>4625547
>too edgy
>2016
le edgy edgy
Almost 1000 women got sexually abused by a muslim terrorist organization. And you start talking about edgy, you retarded sperglord
e008f0 No.4628589
>>4626096
je kan gewoon zeggen dat homo's gore flikkers zijn
73bb3a No.4628625
>>4624631
good job. I like them. it is something that isn't that edgy and something that normies would actually share.
>tfw when i wish i could draw shit
b1cdfd No.4628686
>>4624631
Nice OP. I especially like the fact that you mix in mainstream economic thought like in #2. An important element of the right is the fact that the free market is the best way to distribute resources. From this it follows that a lot of what the left about how our society is unfair and oppressive, is bullshit.
ffc75d No.4628722
87e138 No.4628858
>>4624631
Pretty good keep it up.
b7c083 No.4628860
Good work b0ss, I like them all.
0068c3 No.4628980
Good job, OP. They're actually pretty good.
Official Best-Tier Ranking (Political)
>Diversity herd/"circle of life"
>Privilege malfunction/"no quarter"
>77 cents/"economics 101"
Official Best-Tier Ranking (Humor)
>Not the soda/"progress"
>Circumcision/"hippocratic oath"
>Cops + guns/"narrative"
In my humble opinion, since OP asked.
5fae08 No.4629014
>>4624971
you might wanna scrap that last one in that post OP
9a6ee7 No.4629025
b5180b No.4629043
>>4629014
Whys that?
>>4628980
Hey thanks, very interesting.
5fae08 No.4629090
>>4629043
because its a blatant remake of an already existing image macro, at least give credit to an anonymous author for it or if its from an actual webcomic find out who made it and then scrap it
anyway i think your webcomics are hit and miss, but you got a good number of hits
for example these imo are misses:
first second and fourth one here
>>4624631
second and third one here
>>4624678
third one here, eh, i dont like the pokemon reference but otherwise its a hit for some people i guess
>>4624971
the first one there should involve a college education, then it'd be a hit imo
>>4625012
id get rid of the text in the last panel of the first comic, kinda cringey
>>4625034
i will note though that I do accept Jesus Christ as my Lord and Saviour and unless trump gets shot or something or says/does the wrong im gonna vote for him
the rest of your comics are solid OP
caf1f4 No.4629091
5fae08 No.4629125
>>4629090
also one more thing OP try to keep le ebin may mays excks dee out of your webcomics
5fae08 No.4629130
>>4629090
>says or does the wrong
wrong thing that is
b5180b No.4629132
>>4629090
>because its a blatant remake of an already existing image macro, at least give credit to an anonymous author for it or if its from an actual webcomic find out who made it and then scrap it
Its funny you ahould mention that becasuse on my site in the image description, there is a link to the original image. I was the anonymous author and I specifically stated that I remade it.
d47d2d No.4629544
RIGHT WING ART SQUADS
>>4625350
07f3aa No.4629654
>>4625012
Second comic, 3rd graph is actually incorrect, the bimodal distributions don't look like that.
Other than that, decent work, a lot of rehashed pol memes.
e1aff2 No.4629911
>>4624631
I'm feeling it, you've got more hits than misses. The titles are quality too. Your white bignose people kinda look like the Bones.
offtopic, it just occured to me that Phoney is the Jewish Bone. Marked with big star, deceitful, greedy etc
eb4172 No.4630287
>>4624678
That third one is probably my favorite of the bunch. The Sanders background and the title just sell it so well.
98f813 No.4631195
>>4630287
Glad you liked it. Unsurprisingly it did not fare well when I posted it to reddit, hehe.
95363f No.4631363
>>4624971
last one is plagiarized
like, word for word
jesus h christ
02c3de No.4631375
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>>4624631
hey OP draw this up
massive redpills
8b1201 No.4631376
>>4631363
He already said that he was actually the anonymous author and he linked the original in his comic.
Anon please.
95363f No.4631390
>>4631376
apologies, my good fellows
a51a9b No.4631414
Nice catch on the Che Guevara quote.
Agree with other anons about the Fem Diagram, that was the only one that felt a bit.. rushed maybe, could be because it's posted next to the diversity buffet which I thought was a strong offering.
Ignore carping about technical quality, someone upthread mentioned Dr Seuss, before I saw that comment I was thinking these have a Charles Schulz 'Charlie Brown' element without being plagiaristic of that style.
Have another upboat and keep on keeping on.
b63306 No.4631416
Consider making a Kikebook meme page for it, this shit is really popular with fashy kiddos on that site. You could get a lot of attention if you're shared by someone like Disdain for Plebs or Counter-Signal Memes for Fashy Goys
0801fa No.4631489
>>4624678
>equality poster in Swedish colours
41f9fe No.4631512
This is the same tier as the christ chan comics
2ef789 No.4631520
>>4629911
Glad to know someone else recognizes Bone.
Keep up the good work, OP, these are nice.
46fe33 No.4631531
>>4631363
Sheesh, I made and linked the comic in my own website. Chill out, bruv.
http://redpanels.com/13/
Read the text below the image
46fe33 No.4631541
>>4631489
Heh, you are the first person who's said he noticed that. Was waiting for it.
e9dde6 No.4631546
The art isnt great but you can get better with practice. What you do have is fantastic taste which is something you're just born with. If you keep this up you're gunna be hyuuuuge.
Dont stop, keep it up. Do it for Don. 2016 is the year of the hustle, draw daily and make comics daily.
46fe33 No.4631560
>>4631546
LOL, that happens to be my #1 favorite picture of Trump.
Thanks for the encouragement. It was actually Trump's book, "Think Big and Kick Ass", that moved me to transition to the daily release schedule. 10/10 book, worth 20 times it's sale price - audiobook narrator was top notch too.
41f9fe No.4631567
>>4631560
do you think trump is going to win the presidency?
46fe33 No.4631578
>>4631567
I'm actually trying to find out how to bet bitcoin on it. I know he's gonna win - the comic I released back in August 2015 (http://redpanels.com/14/) was also inspired by the same confidence.
41f9fe No.4631587
>>4631578
sweet
what do you think of the christ chan comics?
46fe33 No.4631604
>>4631587
bretty gud. A bit of heightened contrast on the pencil lines and you're set.
086999 No.4631605
>>4631587
Christ Chan comics are autistic and forced. They take themselves too seriously and aren't even remotely interesting.
41f9fe No.4631607
>>4631604
The latest chapter look like these now.
41f9fe No.4631611
>>4631605
Is it worser than this one though?
46fe33 No.4631614
>>4631607
The improvement in the artist's skill is clear.
41f9fe No.4631621
>>4631614
he started drawing in may last year
41f9fe No.4631635
>>4631605
Lemme rephrase that.
"Is it any different than this one though?"
086999 No.4631636
>>4631611
Yes.
Christ Chan comics are shilled on /pol/ every time a new issue comes out, and despite the negative reaction they keep being shilled. With these they're quick, they're simple, and they're made to put across a point in an effective way. Christ Chan comics have no such point, trying to form a narrative around representations of groups of people he likes and some he doesn't, all the while trying to say "look guys, Christians are totally just like /pol/! We're your greatest ally!".
It's like if somebody made a comic "Captain Jew and the KKKrew" where a Jew and a bunch of Klansmen solve mysteries that are always committed by niggers and spics to try and make people think Jews are cool. It feels forced. Like this person desperately craves validation.
41f9fe No.4631650
>>4631636
So do you believe the artist of the christ chan comics who slaved his entire time trying to build interest in /pol/ OC and attracting outsiders to contribute to /pol/ deserves no compensation for his work?
He made the drawthreads in both 4 and 8/pol/ and maintains them and made christ chan viral.
He also contributed shittons of viral OC to /pol/ and it is still posted till today.
ce02d0 No.4631658
086999 No.4631662
>>4631650
>So do you believe the artist of the christ chan comics who slaved his entire time trying to build interest in /pol/ OC and attracting outsiders to contribute to /pol/ deserves no compensation for his work?
Yes. Trying to do something does not make it worthwhile, and "attracting outsiders" is meaningless if the people you're attracting are the same Christian cuckservatives inhabiting /christian/.
>He made the drawthreads in both 4 and 8/pol/ and maintains them and made christ chan viral.
Okay. That changes nothing. Your use of the phrase "viral" makes me think you might not be a regular here, since you seem to overuse it and don't put it in the correct context. I don't give a fuck if he made his shitty comic viral, it's a shitty comic.
>He also contributed shittons of viral OC to /pol/ and it is still posted till today.
Then why doesn't he make that instead of a shitty webcomic about his gay religion OCs?
41f9fe No.4631668
>>4631662
What's with you and the christ chan comics? Theyre extremely decent for a webcomic series, probably the best /pol/ ever had.
Dont tell me the artist bullied you in a way to the point you felt raped.
41f9fe No.4631669
>>4631658
And the comics in the OP is good?
086999 No.4631672
>>4631668
>Theyre extremely decent for a webcomic series, probably the best /pol/ ever had.
So what I'm getting is that you're the creator of the comics, and you're upset that OP has upstaged you and made something decent whereas nobody liked you shitty uppity comics.
41f9fe No.4631677
>>4631672
I said probably. What wrong, do you think theyre worth a dime of your money?
deb971 No.4631681
>>4631669
Better than yours m9
ce02d0 No.4631682
>>4631669
They're concise, to the point, and funny.
They look like they were done in MSPaint, but other than that, they have a certain style. So yes it is good.
Did I hurt your feeling by insulting your shitty art?
Why did you have to come into OP's thread, who's OC is actually good, and shit it up with your comic? Go back to your thread that you made.
deb971 No.4631685
>>4631682
>Why did you have to come into OP's thread, who's OC is actually good, and shit it up with your comic? Go back to your thread that you made.
Ja, this.
086999 No.4631688
>>4631677
No. And thank you for all but confirming that you are the creator.
OP managed to do what you've been trying to do for months better than you did on a whim. It upsets you, I understand. Don't take it out on us.
41f9fe No.4631694
You know these hateful shitheads that kept shitting on /pol/ OC is just going to make things much much worse for /pol/.
Every single time the Christ chan comics are mentioned in any OC thread, it will be derailed by these unemployed basement aspies that cant stand looking at some guy's past time doodles.
Jesus, you fuckers are making /pol/ look like a cult. Isnt its better if you shitheads just support everything /pol/ makes.
ce02d0 No.4631703
>>4631694
See now you're throwing an autistic fit because no one likes your comics. This isn't an OC thread, this is a thread for OP's webcomics. Shilling, sure, but it's good stuff.
f5837e No.4631706
>>4631694
They're just some comics mate.
41f9fe No.4631709
>>4631682
>shitty art
youre blinding your retarded eyes to good shit.
OP needs shitton of work, put him in a hugbox and this is the epitome of /pol/ OC that you niggers are gonna get.
086999 No.4631711
>>4631694
>Isnt its better if you shitheads just support everything /pol/ makes.
Man you've cracked a nuclear shitfit right here.
41f9fe No.4631714
>>4631703
Im not the aspie thats throwing insults everywhere and shitting on OC.
And look what happened to this thread eh?
You niggers are truly pests.
fba734 No.4631718
These are pretty great, OP. But the campus rape thing needs to not be in the 'real' section. That's their most imaginary problem.
41f9fe No.4631720
>>4631711
Spoken like a true child. Jesus, grow up you little retard.
41f9fe No.4631723
>>4631718
They need some work on the art, its pretty amatuerish work in which the content is the only saving grace.
ce02d0 No.4631728
>>4631709
Really? Shitty art?
And you praise your shitty deviant-art as, quote, "probably the best /pol ever had."
I'm not blinded, you're the autistic fuck sperging out because no one likes your comics, and no one's posting in your shitty thread, so you have to come here and post your garbage, fucking up OP's nice thread.
>>4631714
I'm shitting on your shitty OC, because it's shit. And you're wrong, you are an aspie, do you realize you're having a sperg-out right now?
fba734 No.4631736
>>4631723
The art's fine. Webcomics have taken off with far worse art.
086999 No.4631738
>>4631720
Calm down man. You do realize you called me childish in the exact post you said "no you", right?
>>4631723
The linework is kinda wonky but it's stylish and pleasing to look at, unlike Christ Chan.
It's colourful, simple, and to the point. It's good.
41f9fe No.4631739
>>4631728
Tell me more how OP's art is better than the Christ chan comics.
And speaking of autism, take a good look in the mirror buddy. You've held this grudge for how long now
41f9fe No.4631747
>>4631738
Sounds good. OP should make a patreon and see how much he makes.
It is the best OC /pol/ has ever gotten, yes?
ce02d0 No.4631748
>>4631739
Well, it has style, it has color, it has simplicity.
Again, you're the fucking retard throwing a shit-fit because no one likes your deviant-art comics, and you know I'm willing to bet that no one likes you because you can't handle some criticism.
41f9fe No.4631759
>>4631748
I bet nobody likes you. Kinda strange that you started posting in this thread when you see my comics being posted.
6a1eea No.4631760
How do you pick your colours, OP?
086999 No.4631761
>>4631747
>OP should make a patreon
No he really shouldn't. Good =/= worth money. Bees do a good thing for farmers, that doesn't mean farmers should pay them.
>It is the best OC /pol/ has ever gotten, yes?
Literally nobody has said that.
086999 No.4631765
>>4631759
>my comics
>my comics
>my comics
CONFIRMED CHRIST-CHAN COMIC CREATOR IS AN ASSPAINED AUTIST
7e05de No.4631769
Bretty good OP, might be even passable for normies.
ce02d0 No.4631775
>>4631759
>I bet nobody likes you
Strike a nerve huh? You're really taking this personally man. Maybe you should take the tampon out and go back to tumblr, since you can't seem to handle the banter.
>Kinda strange that you started posting in this thread when you see my comics being posted.
So I'm supposed to be the first poster in every thread, are you implying that? What the fuck is that supposed to mean?
>my comics being posted
Haha, let that one slip huh dumbfuck. You weren't fooling anyone.
41f9fe No.4631776
>>4631761
So you think that OP shouldn't be compensated for his work? He should just keep making these and post them for free like a slave?
Btw what is the best /pol/ OC then?
fba734 No.4631778
Just filter christ-chan's ID and move on. His autism is unbearable and he's shitting up a good thread.
41f9fe No.4631786
>>4631775
You're the one shitflinging like an autist. This thread is doing just fine before you and your special class buddies came in here and shitposted.
41f9fe No.4631790
>>4631778
I literally just show up and suddenly you salty retards woke up from bed and fucked up the thread.
ce02d0 No.4631791
>>4631779
Holy shit, it is like CWC, the shitty art even resembles it.
Man this guy should get a fucking tripcode or something.
>>4631786
Again, you come into OP's thread and posted your shitty comics when your thread is as dead as Bush's campaign. You're the one starting shit, and now you're throwing a shit fit like an autist.
086999 No.4631792
>>4631776
>So you think that OP shouldn't be compensated for his work?
I think exactly that. Bet you're also in favor of paid mods, ain'tcha ya little autismo?
>>4631778
Eh, I've had my fun. Time to get back to the topic at hand I guess.
OPs comic also has a recognizeable design choice (the noses and mouths) distinguishing it from others. I like that choice, since the former provides stylistic differentiation and the latter removes any uncanny valley from weird teeth drawings.
6ccb06 No.4631793
keep up the good work
best:
>>4624971
che & can't outgun washington
>>4625012
bell curve
>>4624992
child violence (good subject that's not discussed enough)
Keep posting your new ones here or we'll forget you exist.
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41f9fe No.4631794
>>4631779
youre reaching real hard. the christ chan comics triggered the salty autists here and wound up fucking the thread up.
ce02d0 No.4631802
>>4631792
Yeah, I think he needs to smooth up those lines though. If the lines were smoother and didn't have all these jagged lines, they'd look really good.
I liked how he brought up even the child abuse thing, which I don't understand why /pol/ could be okay with physical discipline.
41f9fe No.4631804
>>4631792
>this autist meme again
you literally got triggered by my art
Also i made /pol/ Oc's as well. Pic related is one of my masterpieces.
41f9fe No.4631811
>>4631791
>this shithead literally just came to this thread and decides to shitpost once he saw my comics.
literal autism
086999 No.4631815
>>4631802
>I liked how he brought up even the child abuse thing, which I don't understand why /pol/ could be okay with physical discipline.
I'm okay with physical discipline. I was brought up with physical discipline for certain actions, and while I didn't enjoy it at the time, it was a big deterrent for certain actions.
Damaging anyone's property on purpose was cause for a slap on the shoulder when I was a kid. I quickly learned not to do so, and was then more receptive to the explanation of why doing so is wrong. Sometimes a show of force is necessary to remind your kids who is the authority.
41f9fe No.4631819
Eh, im gonna bump with my OC.
I should make a site where i post and label them all.
41f9fe No.4631830
What a bunch of literal cucks.
From these faggot's posts i can already tell that they're pretending to discuss OP's comics.
It mustve sucked to be forced to like something simply out of spite.
ce02d0 No.4631832
>>4631815
I was too, but it doesn't really work on some people.
In some people, it really fucks with them psychologically, and are more prone to violence. I just don't think it's a good idea, because you reinforce that violence is the only way to get shit done.
This is my anecdote, but my father didn't really hit me, I don't think he actually ever did, but he did give me a stern yellings. I've noticed that I yell and raise my voice when I get pissed too. Imagine if he was like my mother who did give me spankings, instead of yelling I'd beat someone up.
I just don't think it's a good idea, that's all.
c8ff76 No.4631835
>>4624971
>not the soda
Okay, I admit it, I laughed.
41f9fe No.4631843
My fair criticism on OP's comics
>Art really needs shittons of work
>Boring panels
>Forced and stale humor
>Human characters are a pain to look at.
>Crappy color palette.
All in all, its pretty subpar.
c8ff76 No.4631853
>>4631802
>I liked how he brought up even the child abuse thing, which I don't understand why /pol/ could be okay with physical discipline.
Because we're not massive leftist cucks.
Corporal punishment isn't "child abuse". Thinking it is makes you a retard.
You are retarded. Anyone who thinks hitting a child makes him more likely to be violent is retarded. It derives from a complete failure to perceive cause and effect. It doesn't make any sense, any more than the idea that, if a kid touches a hot stove and burns himself, he's more likely to want to burn things.
All touching the stove taught him was not to touch stoves if you don't want to get burnt.
I guess you think kids who fight back against bullies are also causing the bullies to be more violent. Think about it, if a kid attacks you, and you knock him down, haven't you just made him more violent?
Physical punishment is one of the cornerstones of reality. Without it, society breaks down into chaos and disorder. See the current west for an example.
086999 No.4631854
>>4631832
>it doesn't really work on some people.
Discipline isn't uniform. It's up to a parent to find out how to properly discipline their child, or a caretaker under some circumstances.
>In some people, it really fucks with them psychologically, and are more prone to violence.
Some people are naturally very rebellious and prone to violence. I was always timid as a kid, so physical punishment worked quite well on me.
>I just don't think it's a good idea, because you reinforce that violence is the only way to get shit done.
Well I would say it also works as the inverse. Look at the current generation, raised with very little discipline and where physical discipline is in many states illegal, and they're under the false impression that violence isn't a way to get things done at all. Violence may not be the only way to do things, but it sometimes is the only way to solve problems. Diplomacy only gets so far.
>This is my anecdote, but my father didn't really hit me, I don't think he actually ever did, but he did give me a stern yellings. I've noticed that I yell and raise my voice when I get pissed too. Imagine if he was like my mother who did give me spankings, instead of yelling I'd beat someone up.
I'd like to think you're smart enough to know when physical punishment is and is not appropriate. My mother rarely punished me in any way, so I was quite a little shit as a kid. But when my parents divorced and I began to live with my father, his parenting style really turned me around. Physical discipline wasn't common at all, but on rare occasions where it was used I quickly learned not to do the things that brought it on again. And it was always coupled with a reconciliation later on, with an explanation of why it had to happen which I was more receptive to due to it.
41f9fe No.4631863
>>4631854
>this entire post
Autistic as fuck. kill yourself child
98c13c No.4631877
Am I the only one here who actually likes the pixelated MS Paint look? I'm not 100% sure why, probably because image board memes used to be drawn mainly in MS Paint(and some, like spurdo and polandballs still are), but it really clicks with me.
ce02d0 No.4631878
>>4631853
>Corporal punishment isn't "child abuse"
Did I say that? I don't think I ever equated the two. The father beat his son over breaking a vase, and it seems like he does it frequently enough to call it child abuse. In referring in the comic, which is a exaggeration of life of course.
>Anyone who thinks hitting a child makes him more likely to be violent is retarded. It derives from a complete failure to perceive cause and effect.
So all the studies that prove that physical abuse correlates to being more violent is "retarded"
>It doesn't make any sense, any more than the idea that, if a kid touches a hot stove and burns himself, he's more likely to want to burn things.
Comparing apples to oranges.
>>4631854
>Look at the current generation, raised with very little discipline and where physical discipline is in many states illegal, and they're under the false impression that violence isn't a way to get things done at all.
I don't really think that's because of lack of physical punishment though, there's so much other shit contributing, like the marxist subversion in TV and children's shows turning their brains into mush.
>but it sometimes is the only way to solve problems. Diplomacy only gets so far.
I agree with that point, you'd have to be either delusional or ignorant to disagree, but on the day to day you can't solve all the problems through blood and iron.
>I'd like to think you're smart enough to know when physical punishment is and is not appropriate
Of course. Maybe the very rare and special occasion for spanking is alright, but slapping your kid because he broke a vase? I just don't know about that, but it is an over-exaggeration because it is a comic.
7bfb7d No.4631879
>>4625215
We're sorry the private centralized currency merchants screwed the Brits over. Instead of raising the colony's taxes you should have ejected the Zionists… Instead, of warring with the colonies at the behest of Zionists due to the colonies creation of debt-free legal tender, you should have adopted their usury free money (like you used to have a long time ago).
Sadly Europeans fought Europeans and now all our countries are being Jewed.
Thanks Brits.
d6e5d4 No.4631896
>>4631878
Understand that to the leftists all corporal punishment is a horrific crime. They view anything which impedes the decadence of the west as criminal pathology.
41f9fe No.4631897
>someone just used my OC in 4pol
damn i cant handle all this giddiness
ce02d0 No.4631911
>>4631896
It's not a horrific crime, it just shouldn't be used. That's what I'm saying.
You don't have to take my advice, discipline your children as you see fit. Just try not to leave bruises.
0aff32 No.4631931
8chon ate my post so tl;dr I like most of them, few are obscure by normie standards or the punchline is missing. I quite like the art style, just polish it (remove jagged edges for instance). Keep it up!
cd6ad6 No.4631964
>>4624992
This is surprisingly funny, you're doing God's work drawfag anon. Love the gleam in the eye of the chef in the third one
46fe33 No.4631990
OP here again,
Ok, so I did a new comic with anti-aliasing. Let me know how it compares to the MS-paint style ones. Going to bed now, so I'll read your critiques later.
Thanks a bunch again!
46fe33 No.4631998
>>4631990
Actually, here is the non-anti-aliased one too so you can compare them.
ce02d0 No.4632000
>>4631990
Yeah that's a huge improvement. Hey man, no problem, keep on spreading those redpills.
8b1201 No.4632012
>>4631998
>>4631990
I like it with anti-aliasing, drawfu.
a51a9b No.4632018
>>4632000
This.
Even on my shitty low-res laptop there's a clear improvement.
cd6ad6 No.4632058
>>4631878
Everyone is sperging out over the kid getting smacked comic. I don't get it because I got a good chuckle out of that one, I related to it. When I was a kid my little sister used to poke me in the back of the head until I'd finally get mad and push her/smack her hand–at which point she'd cry and run to my dad. He'd come in and say hey, did you smack your sister? I'd say yeah, but…then get smacked. You see how that feels? That will teach you that smacking someone never solves your problems! Even as a child I understood what irony was.
41f9fe No.4632063
>>4631990
Work on your anatomy for fucks sake
ce02d0 No.4632075
>>4632058
Alright, that circumstance makes sense though.
I laughed at it too, that's the point of the comics.
c5a46d No.4632084
>>4631990
The antialiasing I think works better with your style with the rounded noses, elbows, etc. While the pixelization is oldschool, these look more polished and will probably consequently get reposted more.
41f9fe No.4632147
>>4632075
Youd contribute better if you shut the fuck up and snd top being such an aspie
41f9fe No.4632151
41f9fe No.4632154
>>4632151
forgot reaction image
ce02d0 No.4632163
>>4632092
Yeah, I don't think OP has a donation thing. But, I guess you could give his site a click.
37502f No.4632170
>>4631739
TBH comics need to be simple as fuck to easily convey the message through different kinds humor that will grab attention from all ages and walks of life not just a few circles of weeboos. If you're gonna brag this >>4631512 art then look for a real editor or a producer and get dismissed within seconds even at your 20th revise. Your story is too forced and sketchy that you'll need a separate author.
True Meaning > Humor > Story > Art
37502f No.4632200
>>4624631
archiving this on https://archive.org/ would be a good idea
41f9fe No.4632212
>>4632170
Fuck you asshole. The christ chan comics are about a trillion times better than what you can do even after 6 years of you in art school.
You shut your fucking mouth, you dont have a fucking say in anything art related by being a know it all basement dweller
f21477 No.4632226
>>4624631
good stuff m8, thank you
ce02d0 No.4632236
>>4632200
Yeah. We really need to capture the autistic sperg out by CWC over here.
354018 No.4632253
>>4624678
>Hippo-crisy
TEN
OVER
FUCKING
TEN
92ea32 No.4632382
37502f No.4632383
>>4632212
>art school
kek
An experienced artist would see his color theory and anatomy skills as notable, with just that cartoonish style alone.
41f9fe No.4632393
>>4632383
Shit is literally spilling out from your mouth
086999 No.4632405
>>4632383
Somebody cap his posts for future Christ-chan shill threads.
Just to save the effort of having to mock him every time.
41f9fe No.4632423
>>4632405
your autism is showing dipshit.
get a job also
c5a46d No.4632437
>>4632393
So you're the guy who did the christ-chan comics?
ce02d0 No.4632445
>>4632437
He is indeed the autist.
Just highlight his ID and look at him throwing a CWC style tantrum. Unadulterated autism.
6a9733 No.4632467
>>4631998
OHH so thats what antialiasing means. I thought it meant not being friends with racists or something.
6a9733 No.4632483
>>4624992
just noticed the blender is the eu flag.. nice touch.
you check that email on your site often? I come up with ideas for red pilled comics all the time but never have the chance to start drawing them.
c5a46d No.4632484
>>4632423
Look man, you're falling for one of the seven deadly sins here, Envy. Pretty hard. Just stop. Let this guy have his thread. His comics are not even in the same genre as yours. Let it be.
90c9b2 No.4632499
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>>4632154
>>4632151
>>4632423
You fucking have the audacity to call someone else autistic?
>>4632092 wasn't talking about your poorly drawn, unfunny, black and white sketches you call comics. He was obviously talking about the Redpill webcomics.
Then you fucking shill your patreon in OP's place as a response?
You're acting like a massive fucking kike
6a9733 No.4632501
>>4632484
believe you replied to the wrong anon, friendo. But I agree, this thread is about an artist and his work, not an autist and his outlet, christ chan be gone with ye!
c5a46d No.4632516
>>4632501
41f9fe? No, I think I got him. It is a little confusing how it panned out in the thread.
b98104 No.4632538
>>4632151
nice try you disingenuous fuckwit.
In case no-one noticed, don't donate to this guy.
Support good OC, not just any old bollocks.
5784d3 No.4632542
Good stuff, OP. Keep it coming. See if you can network a bit and form a little community. Just don't go full-TRS and start incorporating memes into everything haphazardly. That's a sure way to alienate people unfamiliar with that culture. Keep it simple and red-pilled, with little nods to us here and there, as you're already doing. Great stuff.
dbcaf4 No.4632592
Damn good stuff. Content can be hit or miss, but you mostly hit. Art style is wonky, but it has a style when mixed with the content.
e7376a No.4632613
good work OP
these webcomics are great. They are funny and pretty redpill.
keep the good work. Do one about free speech
3ac680 No.4632746
>>4625012
The wage gap comic made me lol.
Great work!
ef7bb9 No.4632914
>>4629654
No, he's right. You're using an older diagram.
Men aren't over-represented on both the dumb and smart side of the bell curve, just the latter.
>women BTFO by hate-science
38ff16 No.4633036
>>4624631
It's like reading Space Moose again. It's beautiful.
5fae08 No.4633568
211a11 No.4633659
>>4631998
Your style needs to be more refined. Not so round and two dimensional.
6a9733 No.4633768
>>4633659
his style is 10/10
98c13c No.4633782
>>4633036
>space moose
Now that you mentioned it, it does feel a bit like Space Moose.
Space Moose was a lot edgier though.
e59fac No.4633877
>>4632092
If any of you want to know what doing shrooms looks like, this gif is the best visual representation I've sever seen.
74e194 No.4634425
>>4625021
I am still waiting for someone to create a Gif/Webm pokemon battle between these two.
b16dc1 No.4635700
>>4624631
Seems quite good!
How often do you plan to update it?
c4a2a8 No.4635968
>>4635700
It is currently being updated daily, it was formerly a weekly update.
41f9fe No.4636553
HOLD THE FUCKING PHONE
How is this Redpill again? Fucks sake this is your average normie tier Trump supporter edited Ben garrison shit.
This doesnt belong in /pol/, take it back to reddit or facebook. Like seriously.
5a1150 No.4636634
>mfw screencapping the autismal fits of this laughable retard and his slip about he being behind those trash CWC-tier comics
>mfw gonna shit up his threads every time he tries to post more of his garbage
8b1201 No.4636652
>>4636553
Come on now, anon, don't be so angry.
f2e1ce No.4636777
These are great OP
Very nice
f9ce1a No.4636820
>>4624631
Good stuff, OP. All saved.
e2f88d No.4636894
Something is really telling me that this "Christ-chan" artist posting in this thread isn't actually him and is just trying to shit on his character, maybe.
5a1150 No.4636917
>>4636894
Nah he posted on his own thread and pretty much confirmed it
>expecting a weeb retard that seriously thinks autistic fanfics are good to not be a shambling embarrasment
b5b911 No.4636966
>OP provides 10/10 oc
>faggot deviantart-tier attention whore shows up to shit up thread
listen up asshat, about the only way you could make this board hate you more is by turning your comic into a hentai. You aren't clever or funny, and your art is meh-tier at best. No one asked you to ruin OP's thread, now fuck off.
8f9d0e No.4637179
Here I am, trying to read OP's good comics and this massive autist spergs out about his horrible deviant-art.
Thanks OP for a some serious quality OC, please filter the autist and move on people.
>>4636634 Will be a hero someday
bf2ae2 No.4638751
>>4631375
This is good as it is.
Saved.
72480a No.4640029
As it turns out, political cartoons are shitty no matter how hard you try to make them otherwise.
Strange, that.
b395da No.4640193
>>4624992
>child violence
Why does /pol/ oppose this? Some children need a tap on the bum at times. Of course, once they get a certain age it shouldn't be done anymore.
Wasn't there a quote from the Bible about this?
5f788e No.4640340
Nice work OP. I think the ones that are just referencing memes, like 1 and 4 from >>4624631 are more obscure and aren't that funny. I also just don't get number 1 from >>4625034 but that just might be my autismo speaking.